Monday: 2115 words on my short story
Tuesday: 264 words on my short story
Wednesday: 895 words on my short story
Thursday: no writing (a sick day)
Friday: no writing. (I worked on photoshop and music composition.)
I am going to start reading this novel this weekend.
This past weekend I read the novel From The Sky. It is the first book in the trilogy of Beyond Moondust, and the next two books are available on Amazon. On Friday, I downloaded a free e-book, and I brought the audio version too.
It was a fun read and I like Samantha (Sam) for she was strong and courageous. other times, she did some really stupid and dumb things that got her into trouble. After all, she was a teenager and teenagers don’t always make the greatest choices.
It was a simple read of a love story about two teenagers filled with tragedy, danger, and figuring out what the future holds for them.
I also felt there was a lot of potential underneath the story waiting to emerge, but it never happened.
After chapter 10 the formatting becomes wacky, and it continues throughout the rest of the book. It’s not every page but like every few pages. It is annoying.
This next part contains spoilers alert.
The novel had the potential to become an epic read, but the author chose not to dive into those elements.
The chapter titles, in my opinion, gave away the plot by outlining certain events in the chapters. For me, they took away the feeling of being on the edge of my seat wanting to know what would happen next.
The beginning of the novel after the prologue gets very confusing, I almost stopped reading it. I didn’t. What the novel needs is a timeline; to guide the reader to understand the events that were taking place for the character. It would help tremendously!
There were times the pacing of the story move too quickly that caused more confusion.
Sometimes, the characters would refer to events that happened in the backstory but gave very vague descriptions about those events; so the reader had to assume. I didn’t like it.
The main plot of the story was Sam falling in love with an alien and the consequences that happened in her life. It drew me into the story, and why I kept reading to see how it would end.
Of course, it was a cliffhanger ending.
I gave this book 4 stars because I enjoyed it was a fun read. I simply excepted what the author had written a love story about a teenager who falls in love with an alien. I also enjoyed the audible book too.
Right now, I don’t have any plans to finish the series.
Tonight, I finished reading this novel, and the review will be coming soon. I also wrote 2000 words today on my short story.
I found this today and downloaded the novel free from Amazon. I read the prologue of this story, so far, it sounds intriguing.